Struggling to Make Your Website Work?

First, I'll Rip Your Landing Page Apart... Next, I'll Transform it into a Cash-Generating Machine!

Stop losing web visitors and start converting them into paying customers.

But before you blindly tweak every single element on your page and make it worse... why not let a sales copywriter (me) show you EXACTLY WHAT to work on?

Why Most Website Landing Pages Fail. Big Time!

Dear business owner,

Let me cut straight into the chase...

You got a landing page, it's not converting and you don't know what to do.

That's why I'm here to help.

You see, most web pages don't have a design issue...

Oh no, they have something worse... they have a sales issue!

Their website wasn't built to sell anything. Sure, it looks nice and all, but there was nothing on the page to convince the reader to take any action.

So, a visitor lands on the site sees your content, then promptly leaves.

Ouch...

That's another sales opportunity lost.

Well, how about we change that, yeah?

Because I've created a special landing page critique package where I'll review your landing page and provide you with actionable steps to improve your conversion rate.

Why... I'll even share with you the exact sales elements I'll be looking out for, right now.

After all, I didn't come up with these concepts... they were first taught by sales legend, Zig Ziglar...

When it comes to any sales presentation, there are 5 main reasons why a prospect will refuse to buy from you.

And if you want more leads, more calls, and more sales from your website...

Then you must start treating every web visitor on your landing page as a prospect. This means your page must answer these sales obstacles...

A nice web design alone just ain't gonna cut it anymore.

Let's get started...

Sales Obstacle #1. Interest

Is your web visitor interested to find out more about what you have to offer?

Because you've really only got about 5 seconds or less to capture your reader's attention. And in that short period of time, your web visitor must want to know more about whatever you’re selling.

A natural start could be in the form of a strong benefits-driven headline, an eye-grabbing image, or perhaps a time-sensitive offer.

But just capturing their interest isn't enough...

Sales Obstacle #2. Desire

You may have heard that the most important part about sales is the offer...

And that's because a good offer doesn't just get your prospects interested to do business with you...

It teases your prospects and gets them excited to want what you're selling.

This allows you to increases your selling price as they'll start treating your product or service as a premium item.

And you don't even need to change what you're selling. What you do need to do is reposition it to become something irresistible to your audience.

Get this magic right and your web visitors will be begging to buy from you and never again from your competitors.

Sales Obstacle #3. Trust

While we're talking about the 5 sales obstacles, let me share with you the biggest selling secret of all...

If you're influential, you don't have to be persuasive.

That's the reason why Youtubers and Instagrammers are selling boatloads of terrible products.

Their fans trust anything they say.

Unfortunately, most of us don't start out with a huge influential list. And that's why the trust element is the single most important obstacle you must solve.

Sales Obstacle #4. Money

This obstacle has to do with your audience and I'm guessing you're choosing to work in a market where your audience can afford your product or service...

But that's not all...

On your landing page, you must make your offer affordable.

Especially when it's a higher-ticket item.

Sales Obstacle #5. Urgency

Finally, once you've checked off the other obstacles, you now need to get your web visitor to take action.

That's where urgency comes into the picture.

But I'm not talking about creating fake urgency like those you see on pages with a countdown timer that resets every time you refresh the page...

There are many other ways to trigger urgency such as helping them realise the continual result of their inaction.

Alright, I'm Starting to See the Problem with My Landing Page... How Does Your Critique Work?

First, you'll need to send in a critique application. (It's easier than it sounds)

Inside this application...

I'll ask you about your target audience and your offer. Your answer doesn't have to be perfect but you should already have an offer or at least an idea of what you want to offer your target audience. (I mean, you should at least know what you're selling, right?)

Once I've determined that you have a decent offer, here's how I'll critique your page:

I'll record a 20-30 minute video where I review your landing page, line by line. Inside this video, I'll make recommendations to tweak and improve the sales presentation. This will also include the design and layout of your web page.
After you've had the chance to go through the video, we'll have a round of Q&A. I prefer to do this over a zoom call as it's a nice way to know the person I'm helping... but if you're camera-shy, you can compile your questions in an email and I'll answer them accordingly.
Finally, you'll have the chance to make the changes to your webpage and once it's done, drop me an email and I'll take a final look at it again.

If I feel that your offer isn't strong enough, then instead of doing a critique video, I'll offer you the option of having a strategy call instead...

During this call, we'll tweak your offer to make it something irresistible to your target audience.

What's Your Investment For An Improved Landing Page?

Remember, our objective here is to boost your landing page's conversion rate.

That means getting you more leads, more enquiries, and more sales.

Because a powerful landing page is the most important asset for any business.

This is also the reason why I charge high prices for any sales letter or sales presentation that I write.

But as this is a revamp of an existing page... and I want to make it affordable for any business owner...

I won't charge you my usual rates which usually starts from $2,000 onwards.

Instead, I'm only going to charge you a small fraction of that... which means you can get the entire personalised critique video plus the follow-up session for just $400.

But I know that even at $400, some newer business owners may still find this a strain...

So, I have an opportunity here to give you this entire session for a steal...

You see...

I'm in the midst of building up my own Youtube channel and I intend to release some critique videos there.

So, if you agree to let me use your critique video and publish it after you've had the chance to make the changes...

Then I'll slash another $200 off the entire package fee.

This way, you get a slightly cheaper deal, and possibly some free publicity. It's a win-win.

Naturally, if you prefer to keep your critique video private, at $400, this is still an amazing value as I'll be working to help you increase your webpage conversion.

But Let Me Make this Absolute Risk-Free for You

Even with the amazing value, you're receiving...

If for any reason after you've watched the critique video and you think my recommendations weren't helpful...

During our video call (or through an email) just let me know.

I'll help you process a full refund of your investment, no questions asked.

You'll even get to keep the critique video and if you choose to do so... make the changes to your site.

This is my way to thank you for putting your trust in my copywriting expertise and experience.

All I ask is that if you do make the changes and once you start seeing an improvement... do acknowledge and let me know about it. I think that's only fair.

Isn't It Time You Gave Your Business And Yourself The Selling Edge

Ultimately, I want your landing page to become a powerful cash-generating machine for your business.

The most important thing about having a landing page is never about making it perfect...

It can look ugly... it can lack images... it can even have poor content on the page...

But it must answer the 5 sales obstacles and trigger the sales emotions of your web visitor.

And I'm here to help you achieve all that for your landing page.

So, please don't stop your business from progressing further by delaying the sales revamp it sorely needs.

Not when you're just 30 minutes away from achieving a sales breakthrough.

Simply complete the form below and I'll send you the registration to get started.

Let's make your web page the sales machine you've been waiting for.

Request Your Landing Page Critique Here

Fill up this form and I'll get back to you in the next 48 hours.

These are the 5 sales obstacles I've found on every successful landing page...

My role is to point out which of these are missing on your landing page... and how you can resolve them in as few steps as possible.

But that's not all...

What makes a decent copy transform into an irresistible sales-generating machine is its ability to trigger a reader's buying emotions.

So, as I rip your landing page apart... I'll also point out how you can rephrase certain ideas on the page to make it more persuasive to your target audience.

With my landing page critique package...

In under half an hour... you'll receive many new ideas tho super-charge your landing page.